Saturday, July 16, 2011
Would you continue reading?
Im very sorry but No and not becasue of the jump... I realized the Jump was a dream sequence unlike the other person above.... BUT I would not continue reading because of its lack of confusion... IE: If say you yourself woke up on a hill in a meadow you would porbaly not start moving right away you would be totally confused and you would start going over the last things you remember Who you are maybe what you were doing last who you talked to etc etc etc.. then as a second thought you might go over the dream as well and then you would look around confused... now you might choose down cause you can see the village or becasue down is easier than up... if there is a path you might choose down and follow the path.... you would also look around at the flora fauna try to figure out where u were OR if its trying to kill you if yer not a nature person.... and if it started to rain and u didnt see the town below most people would go under a tree though thats not the best place most do it..... she/he didnt check pockets didnt do alot of stuff I personally would go poor plot and stop...
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